I'm normally good with typing and stats and all that, however a handful of glossy areas do persist. (I have to keep reminding myself that Dunsparse is NOT Ground, or Ghost, or Flying, or has Levitate, but is a Normal type.) However, with soon to be 700+ Pokemon, can you blame the odd mistake?
I didn't realise that you modified the Foongus and Amoonguss here. Anyway, I like this portrayal better. Great job! If there's one thing I could point out, it's that Amoonguss has two 's' in its name, not one.
Franklin-NapierFeatured By OwnerNov 15, 2011Student General Artist
Very cool! I really like the redesign. I saw you were talking about more grass type Pokemon. Oddish and it's line would work really well. So would Bellsprout and it's line. Some others that would work, would be the Paras line, Exeggcute line, Shroomish line, carnivine, and the Deerling line. Just my pesos worth, lol.
Im working on the redesign of Bellsprout and Victreebel. I was never completely satisfied with the way it turned out. I love the Pokemon but I just felt it was too "cartoony" for the feeling I'm tying to instill in the reader. I should have some page layout and sketches completed by the end of the week. I might even finish and release the page if I strike the right chord.
I think the faces would have looked better more embedded into their bodies, this feels more cartoonish and takes me out of the air of realism. Then again some pokémon are just too toon'd to change. Great work still!
[link]An example of what I mean, they needn't look quite so scary, or maybe they should! : )